SAMPLE CRITIQUE
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SONG WRITER
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Chris Montreaux |
Taste Of Pain |
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Recording Engineer |
EMOTIONAL
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LYRICS: impact of
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TITLE: ability to
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In reading your lyrics, I discovered a distinct emotional draw
that is well represented by your wording. Your cool, biting sarcasm sets the
stage for a dark dialogue about betrayal and love gone astray. Your phrasing
is marked with cliché one-liners that weaken the overall impact and make this
song feel like something that has been heard before. But your presentation is
effective. Your musical composition has a strong, haunting melody but felt a
bit formulaic and lacking in any standout instrumental performance. The title
has a catchy feel. |
TECHNICAL
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VOCALS: vocal
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MUSIC: Composition,
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MELODIES: originality,
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Your vocal acuity is solid and on key, if not outstanding.
Your musicianship shows skill and a clean presentation. However, none of the
trademark “solo” instruments are given the chance to shine, resulting in a
good performance, but not an outstanding one. The melodies are somewhat
simple but suitable for this song on an emotional level. You have a very
formulaic structure and arrangement for this song that doesn’t allow for
intricate changeups but does maintain a steady flow. The production should be
suitable for a demo for the purpose of selling the song to another performer.
However, if this song is intended to represent your potential to become a
recording artist, you will want to work more on your vocal mix and sound
quality, especially on your guitar and bass tracks. Though the Song of the Year songwriting contest DOES NOT take production quality into consideration, a record label may be a bit more critical. |
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Your song has a favorable lyrical topic that, for the most
part, is well presented. You might want to reword the second line of your
chorus and your third verse to give it a fresher, less cliché sound. Heed the
comments concerning your instrumentation and production quality, especially
if you are selling yourself and not the song. This song currently has fair
potential to attract a buyer, but also has much room for improvement. |